Editorial Services
Every manuscript has the potential to become something extraordinary. My job is to help you uncover that potential by identifying what's already working, pinpointing what's holding the story back, and giving you a clear path forward.
Whether you're looking for a high-level editorial assessment or an in-depth revision partner, each package is designed to help you strengthen the craft, clarity, and emotional impact of your novel.
Our Services
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Manuscript Assessment
Perfect for: Writers who want expert feedback and a clear revision roadmap before diving into edits.
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This is a big-picture editorial evaluation of your manuscript. I'll read your novel from start to finish and provide a comprehensive editorial letter that identifies your story's strengths, diagnoses the areas that need attention, and offers actionable recommendations for revision.
This package does not include in-line comments or margin notes within the manuscript itself.
What's Included:
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One complete read-through of your manuscript
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A detailed editorial letter (approximately 10–15 pages)
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Feedback on character, plot, pacing, structure, stakes, conflict, point of view, voice, world-building, and theme
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An assessment of what's working well and where the manuscript can be strengthened
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Clear, prioritized revision recommendations
Investment: Starting at $0.0125 per word
Example: A 90,000-word manuscript starts at $1,125.
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Developmental Edit
Perfect for: Writers who want detailed, scene-level guidance alongside a comprehensive editorial overview.
This package includes everything in the Manuscript Assessment, plus extensive in-line comments throughout your manuscript. You'll receive feedback exactly where it's needed, helping you understand not just what to revise, but why.
My comments focus on strengthening story structure, character development, pacing, tension, emotional resonance, dialogue, interiority, and reader engagement.
What's Included:
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One complete read-through of your manuscript
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A comprehensive editorial letter
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Extensive in-line comments and margin notes throughout the manuscript
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Scene-level feedback and revision suggestions
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Analysis of character arcs, plot, pacing, stakes, conflict, voice, point of view, and overall story effectiveness
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Investment: Starting at $0.0275 per word
Example: A 90,000-word manuscript starts at $2,475.
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Editorial Partnership
Perfect for: Writers who want an experienced editor by their side through a full revision cycle.
The Editorial Partnership is my most comprehensive editorial package.
In addition to a full developmental edit, you'll receive continued guidance as you revise, culminating in a second read-through of your manuscript to evaluate your progress and identify any remaining opportunities for improvement.
This package is designed to provide not just feedback, but ongoing support and a strategic plan to help you complete your strongest possible draft.
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What's Included:
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Everything included in the Developmental Edit
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A personalized revision roadmap outlining the highest-impact changes to tackle first
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Two 60-minute editorial strategy call to discuss your feedback and answer questions
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Email support for follow-up questions after you've reviewed your edit
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Priority scheduling for your second submission
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A second full read-through after your revision
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A follow-up editorial assessment highlighting your progress, remaining opportunities, and recommendations for final polish before querying or publication
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Feedback on your pitch package
Investment: Starting at $0.0425 per word
Example: A 90,000-word manuscript starts at $3,825.