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First Chapter Evaluation

See how well your opening chapter hooks readers

  • 30 min
  • 47 US dollars
  • Location 1

Service Description

Your novel's opening chapter is its most important. It will either hook readers (agents, editors, book buyers), or they'll quickly pass. Curious if yours will intrigue or not? This 30-min session will give you a clear idea of what's working, what's not, and offer clear suggestions for improvement based on your genre and age group. How it works: Submit your first chapter (up to 10 pages double spaced, 12-pt font) and jump on a recorded 30-min call with me to discuss feedback.


Contact Details

  • karyn@storyandprose.com


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